Wednesday, July 29, 2009

Idaho-ku

And the hits just keep on coming! These are snapshots, just as surely as photos are.

Eight point buck on springs
Crossed the highway cleared the fence
Only my heart stopped

Red gold light of dawn
Fire leaping peak to spire
Igniting bird song

Who fought and died here
The roadside marker won't tell
Dry facts bloody ghosts

Constraint makes rivers
Turbulent and dangerous
Gentle flows are free

God Country Guns Cars
Boise folks mow their own lawns
No parking bike lanes

Gobbling up the miles
Giddy from eau de asphalt
Ethel is greedy

Crawling up this hill
Afraid I'll never summit
Don't know why I'm here

Launching down the hill
Wondering how fucked I am
The price of freedom


Come on now, writers! I know you can do better than this....

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